Crit feedback from Amber and Jo;
Issues Raised : Extend the map, have a better key, explain what it is, don't need to include the title "Collection 100"
Use visuals of the maps on the blog to make it more engaging, allow people to post their own photographs and other information.
Make a front and back cover for the 100 listings so that it explains the purpose.
Have a consistent title that works across all of the different designs.
Have visual consistency, consider the layout on the smaller leaflets so that they work better, ensure that all the type size is the same, check spellings.
Actions to be taken : Improve the map to have a clearer key.
Decide on a title that can be used across all the different products.
Consider a way of packaging them as a set and also distributing them to people.











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